Alright, I can get with this. I think the piano in the beginning can use a tone down on the velocity. And the build up from that synth lead until :45 can be turned down too. Maybe progressively increasing its volume until it stops? :45 onward is where I get really interested. The melody is fantastic, simply gorgeous! You have potential at this genre, just keep making more songs like this over and over. You'll learn a lot. But overall, I enjoyed this. This is pretty nice.