Dude, really? I can tell you worked hard on this! It's soft and brilliant, i'm really loving it. I think that squealing UFO noise FX can be left out after about 1:14. I really like the beat, at first it took some time to adjust to it, but the more I listened, the more I loved it. After 2:25, this song is freakin gorgeous. Some chord variation here and there wouldn't hurt, also. The breaks are just right, too. Overall nice job, I'm really enjoying this.